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Claudia Porritt Room 23 Fairfield Intermediate

26th of June 2009

261 Clarkin Road Hamilton Mr. Noble

Dear Mr Noble,

Hi my name is Claudia I am a year 7 and I am in the coolest class of all, room 23. My favourite game for P.E is Flags. I love sport and enjoy it a lot!

I am not quite sure if my learning is increasing, but I am sure it is. I am on the way to achieving my goals and my two years six months, but I still need to do a bit more work on my goals. My goals include making a few more good friends, not getting distracted and completing all of my work. I am achieving my goals by staying focused and on task.

Wow! My experiences at this school are amazing especially camp. My high lights at camp were mainly snorkelling and fun things like that. If you are wondering what camp I went to, I went to camp Pauanui. Swimming sports was pretty fun but tiring because you get puffed out when you try your hardest. I did still like Swimming sports though because it was fun with people singing the chants and watching the people race, also when we race.

I really like this school, but like any other school, it still could have some improvements. I think that everyone would like more mufti days and more discos because first of all, the school would raise more money, second of all, all the kids at the school would like it and third of all it would be great for everyone! I also think that the school could improve some other things such as, upgrading the playground with padding and just sort of upgrading it by putting a few new things to play on.

So I hope you have learnt a bit about what I think is happening at this school, and I hope you take note.

Yours Sincerely, Claudia

//__Miss Crawford - A great start, Claudia! Just remember to tell Mr Noble what your goals are and change a few contractions to full words.__//